One Slip AwayA Story by AnnemarieFlash Fiction - just wondering if it's any good.One Slip Away by Anne M Carroll
'Come on Jenny! We've been chatting online
long enough. I want to meet you. How about a meal at a classy restaurant on
Friday?' C'mon sweetheart.' The words
flickered on the screen. He
wooed and dined her and she felt special.
She could imagine that's how all the women had felt. Jasmine had her nails done, her hair too,
and had even bought a new dress. Carly had lost weight and bought a new outfit;
and poor Amber! - she had gone to the extreme and had Botox done and varicose
veins removed. Now they were all in the morgue, or rather their body parts
were. She shivered as she wondered how many more were unaccounted for. They strolled hand in hand through busy
streets, down by the riverbank, stopping outside a small cottage. Excitement
tightened in her chest. She
went into the darkened house , his arm around her, a glance behind as the door
shut, the fading light and noise from outside. But something wasn't right. She felt
sleepy, not herself. It must have been the wine at the restaurant. The
toxicology report showed the victims were drugged, but she hadn't seen him put
anything in the wine. She was on his couch, he was on top of her. She couldn't speak, she couldn't give the signal. Surely they would know something was wrong. He would soon spot the wire. They'll still catch him, all the DNA evidence will be here in his house, but she doesn't want to be his last victim. 'You're always one slip away from death in
this job', her colleagues words began to rattle in her ear. One slip away from death. © 2017 AnnemarieAuthor's Note
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