Wishful Thinking

Wish me this, wish me that

Wishes for my wisher true

If wishes could wish me to heaven

I'd dance across the moon with you

Wish you once and wish you twice

Miss me, kiss me, pay the price

For wishing has a cost you know

a toll for walking golden row

If wishes could help wisen me

I'd wish for them outnumbered, see

I'd give you one, I'd give you ten

I'd wish for us to start again

back to the days of shooting stars

to window sills and virgin hearts

when naive glances took a peek

and wishful wishes they did seek

Reviews

[Consuela Burke]

"If wishes could help wisen me
I'd wish for them outnumbered."

So would I. This whole poem is clever.

[Avocations of Amber]

Thank you Ms. Clarity! :) You made my day....

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if I could wish a wish for you
I'd wish all your wishes true
a thought to make hope shine on
and carry Love within it's song
all of this I wish to see
to make my wish come to be

Peace

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write here. Your words just flow!
A write so wonderfully written.

[An owl on the moon]

There is both a subtle playfulness here and a deeper sense of wondering, wandering back across the years to a more peaceful time... a time when wishes were believed with the heart. This is such a beautiful dance of words!

[Simple_mee]

Beautiful...I raelly liked way the word "wish" has been so successfully used in this piece time n time again.
May all our WISHES come true... ;)

[Shalini Dinesh]

if only all our wishes come true! wow, life will be great and maybe at times boring too, God know which of our wishes to be full filled... a very cute poem...

[Ed Hart]

Yes, very sweet; but, please don't wish for that, because what's begun the same becomes the same, and every seed grows into its larger self...so, if you wish for anything, let it be this golden ring held out to you, that makes your wise heart grow and face into the wind, and smile at everything you know...