Fair Maiden of the Avalon

Guinevere and Lancelot......

Fair Maiden of the Avalon

by: Amber McNally

Fair maiden of the Avalon beseeches thee tonight

to guide her on a journey filled with dangerous delight

A quest through death’s long corridor til’ every room is sought

To search for one, the gallant knight, her lost love Lancelot.

Their hearts were bound together when at first their eyes did meet

but their love was kept in secret and thus ended in defeat.

So now the lady Guinevere does seek for love renewed

among the ghostly gallows calling out for her love true.

Reviews

[Nobody Now]

Haunting and ethereal. Nicely worded and weaved. Love that it feels like a classic. The rhyme and rhythm are spot on also. Love the choice of Guinevere and Lancelot. Splendid.

[Avocations of Amber]

Yes, it's a sad story, but romantic, which is why I wanted to write about it.
Thanks for reading my work and giving me some nice feedback. :)

[Shalini Dinesh]

this poem looks so classic and nice rhyming and flow, i wished it was even more long, cause the poem ending so soon, lovely poem....

read my poem "my fair maiden" and give your review, i think you will like it, its a love poem too..