I'm a Disease.

Oh, such mind, so anorexic; these thoughts I cannot consume.

My mouth, bulimic, i cannot stop these spewing words.

These sounds, asthmatic--so restrained beneath my breath.

Confined, pursued, misled, astray. . .just gone.

Reviews

[Re-Pete]

wow. so glad i stumbled upon this piece. so well said. this hits hard. bravo. i think writing is the cure for you ... :)

[Ranger Kessel]

Very tough language for thoughts that are difficult to explain in find myself doing the same thing. Good write.

[Serendipity Planet]

Very smart and special
I love your imagination and game with words

Beautiful Disease

[Hayllie]

So descriptive! You paint such a picture with your words, and though I think there is times where everyone feels like they are a disease, The ability to express your writing and make someone smile shows how beautifully your piece is written

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I love the comparisons and metaphor employed in the piece. Your personification of the disease from which you suffer sounds all the world to me like irresistible creativity. I'm sorry, I'm afraid there's no cure except to produce more art and poetry. :) Well done.

[¿]

You know I've read that a disease can befriend with another disease while one is half injured by the other. Like virus and bacteria (they ain't disease though) By going through filters of thousand sufferings, one turns feeling like a disease to make all bow down. Be blessed :)

[CLR9]

I can understand you fully. I've had an eating disorder for many years because a boy I loved didn't like my body. Please, if you are struggling, get help! We here at WC are here for you!

[Sami Khalil]

Gossip is a disease and a sharp weapon of destruction. Really powerful poem in short words.

[Rose Marie]

This is really nice.. Highly enjoyed

[Perdition]

Have I mentioned how nice it is having your words returned ? This read is a door being closed on sunlight. A moment when life leaves on the whim of insult and boredom, the appetite of gray matters, It's wonderful~