Can I Love You?

Can I love you-
Whilst your eyes pierce my skin,
Underneath the infinite stars.
Can I touch your fleeting mind-
As your lips extinguish these thoughts,
Beneath a raging sea of woven fabric.
Can I feel your hands, your entire soul-
Dancing around my feverish heart;
Forever now and forever always.

Reviews

[Lizzie A.]

I love this. You've captured the raw uncertainty of baring your soul for another, the vulnerability.

[Kim S.]

such a wonderful and powerful write here

[Mr. D]

You could...but you would not want to.

[TeeMarie91]

wow very powerful & beautiful poem Amber! Nice job! Keep up the good work!

[Serendipity Planet]

What a beautiful question
What a beautiful poem
love it

[Chris]

Seemed like a real asking... not rhetorical.