Facade

Facade

A Poem by ambur

The facade you see, the person you love
It is not whom you think it is.
For I have faults and tears and pain
It's just, I'm the best at building walls.

The facade you see, the person you love,
It's a mask I wear with confidence.
For I have scars and wounds and fears
It's just, I'm the best at falling apart.

© 2014 ambur


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ambur
rough draft, of the moment

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Reminds me a lot of one I knew:(

Posted 10 Years Ago
Great start! I think that it covers a lot of ground in two stanzas. It is definitely worth considering more of the contradictions in further stanzas.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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 Added on May 15, 2014
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