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A Poem by ambur
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Unfinished, rough draft

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She chases the tear drops down my face,
Her tiny porcelain finger barely makes contact.
She lets out an innocent laugh, such happiness--
While oblivious to the slow death inside me.

© 2013 ambur


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Enjoys the character misery. Not so nice.
But nice write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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ambur
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