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the moon captures her

captures her and holds her gaze

it holds her heart with no outlet

visions of control all a blur

life turning from the stage

lights of beauty have become

her greatest challange to over come

 

Author's Note

i know its amature but its a work in progress

Reviews

[Nyida Strong]

Interesting. I always viewed the moon as something beautiful and kind in the darkness, not controlling. I look forward to other works.

N. Strong

[StoryTailor]

You give yourself too little credit. It's not bad.