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You used to listen to every thought

even the not so thought through

but now even a simple story

will make me turn boring

you used to freak about talking

how long, making it every chance

now a days its me who does the freaking

over the little things you used to do

you say you love me

that you can't imagine life without me

but who says that being your everything

is nothing but just a work of fiction

whos to say you lie everytime you say those three little words

whos there to say I'm stupid

for all my crying

for feeling like I'm wasting my time

nothing I do can fix this

nor can I even try

I feel like we are dying

and that soon there won't be

a you and I

Reviews

[Emily]

Ouch. These words just really blew into me. I hate to admit that I've been there, and there isn't really a good fix -- there never is. It is so hard to be 'there' and have someone who is not being the person you love.

Another well written piece. I'd like to see a little punctuation and some capitals on the first letters in the sentences to punctuate your words.