Anorexic Confessions.

Dear food diary,

Today I had zero calories

I feel

Ecstatic

Amazing

Wonderful

Pleased

Proud

Content

Uneasy

Empty

Foolish

Depressed

Sick

Dead

 

I feel like I need help

Reviews

[Kit]

This is so true. And I can really relate.

[Silvario]

Love the format and the straight forwardness of this piece. Well written, in that the words you chose and the manner in which you presented them got the message across profoundly. The ability to make your readers "feel" emotion, any emotion, is the mark of a great writer and this piece does just that. Well done.

[Bryce Simonds]

Well this was pretty honest of you. I don't normally review "stories". So I don't really have much to say. All I do have to say, is I hope you get better, and food is the way to go dude, it really is.
-Bryce

[Ari]

This is one of the most honest and heartbreaking poems that I've ever read. I imagine that a hundred people have already said this, but if you need anything. . . don't hesitate to message me.

And for God's sake, keep writing. It's beautiful and amazing.

[French Flair]

I like it. It's very witty and straight to the point. Keep at it! (:

[AmberCRUNK]

I'm sorry.
But, No!
You have not discovered a cure.
It is a lot more technical than just putting food in your mouth.
To me, it seems to be a way of life.
Just like a religion to some.

It is a very complex disease.
No-one will ever find a cure.
To more define it, it is the way I [ & we ] see ourselves.
I will not be reviewing any of your work for your heartless review on mine.

And don't mail me and tell me to get over myself.
It's not a matter of me getting over myself.
I put my work on here to be criticized in positive or negative ways, yes.
But I do not write for your sick enjoyment to torment!
So how about you rip the tickets off yourself and grow some balls!
Obviously you are on here to review,
So do it in an appropriate manner!

Thanks but no thanks.


PS; I'd just like to let everyone know, he soon blocked me.

[Kenneth Miles]

Put the food in your mouth, chew, and swallow.

I just discovered a cure. The government must give me a few million dollars, I think.