Fire Senryu

The element of nature fire symbolizes ironical feeling warmth or fury .

Element of Life

Everlasting Affection

Agonizing burns

Reviews

[ganga ramesh]

the irony of fire holds me astonished and so do your three lines:)

[AYVID N]

The two facets of fire...

[Ambereen]

Indeed "warmth and burns "

[AYVID N]

yes :)

[David Scott]

I like this. Getting burnt is essential to life.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good description of fire in seven words. You did a amazing job. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[gabrielle]

With so little words come with mystifying meaning.

re: author's note- except for sonnet, i myself would not know the different forms of poetry. nicely penned.

[Ambereen]

Thanks you

[Erinne S.]

I'm not quite sure what a senryru is, but I did like this piece :)

[Ambereen]

thank u

[Ambereen]

It's a Japanese form of writing, It has to be
5-7-5 syllables.

[Time's The Bond]

A thousand definitions in 3 lines. Wonderfully done my friend

[kublakhan27]

You've said so much with so little here...well done^^

[Ambereen]

thanks

[Frieda P]

Yes, it fits nicely, but even nicer than that fact, is this piece, how concise and truly meaningful!

[Ambereen]

wow... My first one ...and must I say ur the Inspiration? Many thnx

[Frieda P]

Wow, how sweet, I only starting writing them since I've been on WC about two months, I find them challenging... nice job...and thank you!