A short romantic poem . Its surely not of the level I have read of fellow writers on this site however I appreciate suggestions , reviews which help me improve .
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I love reading short romantic poems! It lets me escape from the single world for a brief moment and remember how it felt to be important and special with a guy holding me close to his heart. I can't ever forget those promises of staying together forever and how it crumbles slowly over time, as we fall apart. Love is a beautiful experience for anyone to go through period! Whether you have more bad moments than good, it is all worth the fall in the end. Back to your poem, your description and words really touch my heart and relive those memories I had with all of my ex-boyfriends. No, it's not a bad thing at all. So please don't apologize! For someone to help me relive those happy moments, that's an applaud for you more than anything. Thank you for that! I read your Author's Note and I shook my head. Girl, people are going to have different styles of writing when it comes to writing about the one and only thing---love! Every person on this website has a different view on it. You're an outstanding writer and I really do love receiving read requests from you to see how you keep developing into an even more wonderful talented person! :)
Side note: Never give up your dreams! Fulfill them and continue what you love to do most--write! :)
This is such an intimately sweet poem, reflecting your soul connection with that significant other in such a short, but strong manner......very touching.
A Novice to poetry and a Chartered Accountant by profession . Recently i Stumbled on the fact that i could write a few lines with ease . So here i am, i would love all suggestions and reviews from .. more..