To you ,With love!

A romantic poem

In  your glowing Eyes

I see hope

In your Husky  voice

I find my name secure

In your firm hands

I see my Future strong

In your cuddly hug

I find solace 

In your life

I see mine 

Author's Note

A short romantic poem . Its surely not of the level I have read of fellow writers on this site however I appreciate suggestions , reviews which help me improve .

Reviews

[Emberlorna]

"In your life

I see mine"

I love the whole piece but the ending is perfection. A beautiful expression of true love :}

[ganga ramesh]

"in your life i see mine"
if i get my man i am sure to give this to him and propose:)

[Carissa Marie]

Short but sweet. I love it!

[Lily Mae]

Very sweet.. and full of tenderness.. nicely done..xo :)

[Margarette]

A simple yet elegant poem speaking of love and compassion. Truly beautiful!

[C.C. Marx]

What I like is how love can be described in so many different and unique ways, and your examples were very sweet, nice job

[David Scott]

I'm not sure if this is love or getting lost in codependency. They sound like the same thing on paper sometimes...
My take. I liked the poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry of love.
Coyote

[Zachary_James]

I love how hopeful this is, love this beautifully penned.

[Ambereen]

Thanks a ton

[Ambereen]

Thanks a ton

[Erinne S.]

This was simply put in a beautiful way. Well done :)

~Erinne

[Ambereen]

Nice to hear from you after long and yes thank you so much