Blinded BY Beauty !

Blinded BY Beauty !

A Poem by Ambereen
"

Beauty Of Colors cannot be seen by all.

"

He saw her by the stream

Unaccompanied she sat

Tossing small rocks in the river bed

While the wind softly blew

Her tresses over her face now and then flew

Radiant and glowing was her skin

Her lips luscious pink

The smile on the face brightened the day

Her eyes were luminous blue

Love at first sight it was for the artist

A beauty on the canvas he must put

Several strokes and sometime later  

The innocence and beauty on paper he had captured

With his best work he headed straight to her

"Young lady ,you are the most attractive women I met

This portrait of yours you shall adore I bet"

Tears rolled down her beautiful eyes hesitantly she said

"Sorry sir  the world around me is but colorless.

I am afraid  I am vision less."

© 2013 Ambereen


Author's Note

Ambereen
Every one around is not as lucky to see the deep blue sky , the sun set and sunrises , the butterfly fly , the green lush trees . Those of us who can afford these beautiful sights are indeed fortunate . THANK YOU LORD !

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This is a really beautiful piece. It creates a wonderful scene
But the word 'chucking' in the third line doesn't seem fit? Perhaps tossing or something might work?
Sorry
It really is amazing and lovely
I love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

thanks your suggestion .... shall change it :)
Ambereen

11 Years Ago

There you go done :)
floralhorror

11 Years Ago

Oh thank you for taking my suggestion! :)
This really is a wonderful piece!!
Your words took me near the river watching the artist painting that beautiful girl. And I was actually surprised by the ending. Nicely penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ambereen

11 Years Ago

Thank u
I like this...you words create a beautiful scene. It is sad to think that some people can not see the beauty around them, I am so glad I am able to see.

Great Job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ambereen

11 Years Ago

thank you

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Ambereen
Ambereen

India



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