Faith can move mountains

While life is all about ups and downs one little thing that you must hold on to is faith in Lord and yourself . As the Bible rightly says Faith can move Mountains!

when things go wrong as it sometimes will; 

And everything around does not fit the bill;

there is one little thing that will See  you through crisis,

It comes in all shapes and sizes;

That little thing is faith in lord and yourself;

And life shall have a different story to tell;

So believe he and you together can, come out of a barren land;

Into a garden full of grass and roses ;

life is indeed as one chooses;

So make the  right choice grasp hope n faith ;before it is really late.

Reviews

[Erinne S.]

I love the underlying theme of hope :) I love reading pieces like that, because they are so genuinely true. I agree with the review below with the use of 'c u' and 'n u'. I believe it takes away from the beauty of this piece and you wrote it so well that you wouldn't want something to take away from it. Anyway, that is strictly my opinion and you can write this piece however you want :) Well done with it and thank you for sharing.

~Erinne

[Ambereen]

Thank u so much ... yes i shall keep in mind d "c" and "u" .... just dat really got so addicted to d sms language !

[DrD]

A capsulized philosophy promising hope. Noble themes well crafted. I do not particularly like the "c u" and "n u" that is almost text jargon but the thought is well presented and makes it a worthy read.