Do You Remember Me?

Do You Remember Me?

A Poem by Amber Dawn Agin
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Do you ever remember me when you look at her? Some questions for a past love.

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I wonder

has your new love taken you by surprise?


Do you ever look into her eyes

expecting my warm amber

as you’re greeted by her dark chestnut?


Do you ever watch her hair blow in the wind

and remember how the sunlight colored mine auburn

as hers remains a deep shade of black?


Do you ever take her on walks in the fall

and you can’t quite explain the odd feeling that unlike me

she doesn’t step on every crunchy leaf?


Do you ever dial her number

and expect to hear me call your name

when her softer voice picks up?


Do you ever lace her fingers with yours

and notice her hand feels differently in your palm

and that she is not familiar to you?


Does it ever hurt

that her name doesn't flow as easily off your lips?

© 2016 Amber Dawn Agin


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Amber Dawn Agin
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How touching this is, I can feel it frnd... I really felt the thoughts you have poured here... It takes the reader to a place where the poet/speaker expressing her pain of heartbreak... How painful and sad this is... We expect our past love to be felt by the person we loved, we think of if the person still think or miss us or not... May God bless you frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Dawn Agin

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review, friend! xxx



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Some questions of a past love are really difficult answer and even hard to forget. After all first love is first love. Hard to forget those beautiful memories...Nice poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Dawn Agin

8 Years Ago

I agree. Thank you for the review! xxx
Writer at last! Sky ~

8 Years Ago

Most welcome :)
How touching this is, I can feel it frnd... I really felt the thoughts you have poured here... It takes the reader to a place where the poet/speaker expressing her pain of heartbreak... How painful and sad this is... We expect our past love to be felt by the person we loved, we think of if the person still think or miss us or not... May God bless you frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Dawn Agin

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review, friend! xxx

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Added on May 9, 2016
Last Updated on May 9, 2016
Tags: heartbreak, breakups, past loves, old scars, remembering, memories, questions for you

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Amber Dawn Agin
Amber Dawn Agin

Harrisburg, IL



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Just your typical 19 year old girl that's kinda messed up in the head and thinks she can be poetic *shrugs* more..

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