Love Is...

Love Is...

A Poem by Angela
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Poem about how I think love is seen now a days.

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Love is...

 

Love is no longer an emotion, but a word

It's not felt within the heart anymore

Love is now expressed a dozen roses and a card, seldom is it heard

Love is no longer an emotion, but a word

The way people show their love now is absurd

Love has been locked behind the golden hallmark door

Love is no longer an emotion, but a word

It's not felt within the heart anymore.

 

 

 

© 2008 Angela


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I like this. It has a powerful message! I like the colors you used. Very nice! Great poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I must say that usally when I review someone I have more bad things to say then good. And usally I have really good advice. But with this poem, I honestly don't know anything bad to say. It's well written. I has a nice flow but sounds a little bit forced. just write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very nice. I like the idea behind this one that no one actually feels love, they just say they do. It's some happy new trend that everyone likes to be a part of no matter how old they are. Thank you for sharing this.

"Love is now expressed a dozen roses and a card, seldom is it heard" --- If you read this I am sure you can stop what is missing. Make sure to put "by" before the a.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow. This was great. I would have to say flawless!
Kudos

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you. Yeah well thats how I feel about it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Aww, once again your words flow together flawlessly. Even if the subject is one not all might agree on but it is one I understand. You do see a lot of people misusing that powerful phrase. Once again great work and beautiful poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Angela
Angela

New Madrid, MO



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Hi, my name is Angela and i'm anything but your average person. I'm 20 years old. I'll be 21 in September. I live in the small town of New Madrid, Missouri. I still currently live with my parents but .. more..

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