To there

To live, to love, to see...to be.

Simple things, breathing life

Tumble through, struggle on

Feeling strong, losing sight

See the sky, wonder why

Breathe...fall...through the air

Be alive, it forces the will

to move, flow, drift

Never, no rarely....cease

motion, scenic travels

Distance carries time...

On the other side, 

Free.

Reviews

[Creepy Swine Guy]

This poem is very vivid. Alluding to the things that we do every day, loving, seeing .. just being. The "tumbling" seeming to be about how we get through this living, it can be a struggle. For all of time, mankind has looked to the skies for it's answers and in this poem, as so often happens in life it seems no answers are readily available ... as we see by more falling. The last line ... a hope and a wonder that we have all silently had ... peace on "the other side"?

I like the vividness and I like the very real picture of life that it shows and the question it poses at the end. I only withhold two points because the OCD in me want to see more periods. [Head Hung] ... sorry.

[LareBear]

To live is to be
Traveling a long distance
Breakthrough to freedom

-A haiku review