I'll be...

This 1 is dedicated to my first crush.. now she is gone.... :(

Though i know i cant be your feet...
Still i want to kiss your cheek..
Neither my mind nor body..
can walk with you beside...
yet you will see me right by you side....
Though i know i can never be yours...
still you 'll always be there.... 
in some frozen corner of my mind.. 
oozing your heart... into mine.... ------ Amar Laksh

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i love this! this is delightful reading. i know the heart of the write is sad but you have made it playful with your spelling and wording. love is fickle and fleeting, it is like a misbehaving child, either correct it or send it away.....excellent write

[amarlaksh]

Thanks a lot Quin! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not sure I like the use of colloquial language in this sort of poem but it does have feeling if a little clumsy in parts Amar

[amarlaksh]

John... i am fully aware of what you are saying.. but the fact is... this 1 is close to my heart....so.. kindly ignore the technicalities :P

[Blue Ivory]

I saw this on facebook. This is really heartfelt. Don't worry, it gets better. I know what I'm talking about :)

[amarlaksh]

Thanks buddy..