Through....

Its my first love poem, quite short :)

Through the yard, in autumn quiet  

Hand in hand, and love in sight,

Among crisp leaves, with tepid hearts

Soul shared in two parts

Parch lips, for another pair

Thirst deep, and minds bare…

                                                    --- Amar laksh

Reviews

[Acron 4]

very good poem, short, to the point.....these few words say so much......thanks for sharing

[de_maruf]

simply beautiful

[Alexa Tasch]

I love the simple beauty of this piece. I can't believe this is your first love poem. It's great!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

You're very creative when coming to your choice of words.Keep them coming.....