The RainA Story by amarlakshIts a thriller. not much to say :)In the deep corner of the
house lies the room of the 16 year old Garry Ibrahanovic. With walls of grey and
some classic portraits, his room was a paradise of filth and eeriness. The
wooden table harbored an entire array of irksome and odd stuff. It was nearly
impossible to spot an exploitable object of desire in such a good mess. Amidst
the
At last 11:00 .a.m. witnessed
the rising of the prince. But wait something very usually unusual happened! He
was late again! The mother cried “Wake up Garry! You will be late for your
piano classes!” “Your sir would be livid.” declared his father with the heavy
voice. Once again, in the most recent past (which happened to be yesterday!) he
was unable to accompany time. It was so cruel! Hopping and tying his shoe Peddling swiftly on his new
bicycle Garry entered the pre war area. Half way down his route, an object
appeared to be missing! He was without his precious glasses. The absence of
this little seeing aid could not trouble him! He was a strong boy. Yet again
the luck played his part! His bicycle tire got punctured! On top of that,
another bad news arrived. He was now being bombarded with the universal
solvent. Few times have been there when Garry became ferocious, but this became
the topmost on the list. After some scrutiny, he
managed to get the shade of a giant tree.
Under heavy rain and breeze,
he saw a figure! It looked like that of a post office box! No it was of a man
under an umbrella! He would be saved! The man looked to be in an army uniform
with a rusty red umbrella. “What are you doing here in this strong rain boy?”
asked the stranger. After Garry described the tragic death of his bicycle, he
asked for some shade. Few minutes later, he asked Garry’s name. After getting
his answer the questioner was himself asked the same question. “You wouldn’t
want to know it. Few people like my name.” Hearing the weird reply Garry
thought not to go further in that matter. “So you were in the army??” “Yes! I
fought out at front” said the stranger enthusiastically. Garry felt proud at
the reply. He was a true German patriot. Perhaps the reason was her mother’s
inspiring stories of the War. All the War legends and heroics tales melted deep
into his conscience and oozed out pure patriotism and nationalism.
Some miles later they came to
an old bunker. The roof was extremely porous, bricks had lost their color long
ago, and it had a small red gate ready to be called off. Concerning for his
safety, he asked for a light. “I know this area quite well come on, you will be
safe here” assured the stranger. Slowly crawling to the inner section, they
managed to get to a safe and constant position. “Are you scared of me? If you
are then don’t be because the rain will be there for pretty long.” Right at
that moment he proved himself to be an inclusive liar. The sky went blue and
the clouds disappeared. Garry instinctively took to the world leaving that dark
and dull company.
Although we humans have been
evolving for centuries but some peculiar traits are still in their primitive
stage Frequently it happens that at
first look we miss some clear details and they get stored in our subconscious.
At length when it dawns on us we notice, regret or sometimes like in this case
thank the defect.
While walking on the road
something struck him! He recalled the question for his name. Now the answer was
lucid. Two evidences stood strong for the deduction.
A short moustache and a
swastika sign on his arm. ------ Amar Laksh © 2012 amarlakshReviews
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19 Reviews Added on December 28, 2012 Last Updated on December 28, 2012 AuthoramarlakshAgra, Atheist, IndiaAboutWell i am just a seventeen year old creative kid who likes to read and write more..Writing
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