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quotes

A Poem by amarlaksh
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these are some of my 'word vomits'

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'Never get afraid of showing anything to your parents, they weren't afraid to show you to the world.'

'when you are in love, love is in you.'

'the need of a deed, should be a deed of need.'

'the hardest task is the one done with the coolest of mind'

'we humans do not fear death, we fear the way we get it'

'when you try to be immune to the situation, the situation becomes immune to you'

© 2012 amarlaksh


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First and last ....!! great work genius! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I adore the first quote, which is so sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is incredibly insightful Amar on a number of levels. I don't get what you are implying by "word vomits", unless what is profound leads to nausea. Anyway, you have put forth six messages here that are unique yet related of course. You have, with paradoxical mastery made these thoughts so deeply provoking, that on second thought, may make one a little queezy after all! Outstanding!

Posted 11 Years Ago


All of the quotes are very deep and meaningful. Nice work. I would take each of the qoutes and try to make a poem out of each of them just as a twist.

Posted 11 Years Ago


amarlaksh

11 Years Ago

WOw thanks. do request me your work. :)
I like number two.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's sometimes the snippets of truth that really sink in, I'd love to know, have these been established over a long time or were they all written and thought of together?

Posted 11 Years Ago


awwwwwwww these are cooooooooooooooolll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great! specaily the first 6 :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


amarlaksh

11 Years Ago

thanks !
Like the idea here, a kind of anti-poem. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


exciting

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow........
well thats agreat way of expressing today's world
which might not have been in your mind when wrting thi. but you achieved it!
the only to get through this crazy world is becoming immune to it
loved it;;;;;
nice work my pal

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Agra, Atheist, India



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