Physitry

I know its outrageously stupid and dull. But i always wanted to combine my 2 hobbies poetry and physics. Here is the result, if you can bear it

 
Would we know gravity?
If Newton was a bard,
Would you know relativity?
If Einstein was a poet hard
Hard on writing sonnets maybe,
Or ballads, or odes on a paper shard
All to please his dear lady,
Making her glad, with postcards  
What then would be his discovery?
A new form of poetry!
A one that's called physitry!
A one that's called physitry!
 
                ---------- Amar laksh

Author's Note

Please be soft

Reviews

[Salar Majak]

nice trebuit, i like it

[Mz]

Oh, how those guys plagued my high school days.

I too cannot imagine what had Einsteins poems been like. Perhaps something along the lines of:

" E equals mc square
for you my love
my heart is bare."

Anyway it seems whatever Einstein had cooked up it still would have made history.

Your writing is awesome!
Keep up the good work. :)

[amarlaksh]

thank you for your review

[AYVID N]

I truly appreciate this. And I mean it. That's because of the effort to be novel. It mat not be perfect the first time but it will sure make people sit up an notice your work in a sea of sameness. And who knows out of it may come unprecedented success! Keep trying to be different! I'm inspired...DN

[amarlaksh]

thank so much for your kind review

[Meallea Pomorette]

I really wished Einstein was a poet... Because the formulas he introduced made my life a chain of of mind boggling mathematics... He might be a genius but apparently I'm not... I'm only lucky in solving math problems... But I must admit that what he did was really useful even if he made my life really hard...

I really liked the word "physitry"...
Now I wonder if he'll use formulas in his poem to please his lady...
Anyway, nice write...

[amarlaksh]

thank you

[Meallea Pomorette]

Your welcome...
(^_^)

[Adam Whitworth]

very good

[amarlaksh]

What? did you liked it??