Physitry

I know its outrageously stupid and dull. But i always wanted to combine my 2 hobbies poetry and physics. Here is the result, if you can bear it

 
Would we know gravity?
If Newton was a bard,
Would you know relativity?
If Einstein was a poet hard
Hard on writing sonnets maybe,
Or ballads, or odes on a paper shard
All to please his dear lady,
Making her glad, with postcards  
What then would be his discovery?
A new form of poetry!
A one that's called physitry!
A one that's called physitry!
 
                ---------- Amar laksh

Author's Note

Please be soft

Reviews

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Absolutely not dull! This sparks imagination from unusual points of view.
pat~

[Pragya Saxena]

There is much more...
Physics and poem :)
The perfect two combined... Must say your ideas are brilliant! :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

see what you mean....along the same lines....great minds eh?

[amarlaksh]

yaa... same lines !! :)

[Acron 4]

There's more to the pendulum swing then it's equation. There's more to Newtons apple then the discovery of gravity. Is there more to light, more to energy, is there more to mass the just E=MCsquared? Thank God for metaphor.....wonderful wonderful poem.......thanks so much for sharing

[amarlaksh]

thank U so much for your beautiful review sir

[Acron 4]

my pleasure

[Dinesh Sairam]

I have little to comment or critique on the poem itself, but I'll tell you this: Poetry is the science of the self.

[Felecia]

I don't know much about science, and I can't say it's my favourite subject, but this is a great poem about scientific people and things aha, very well done.

[Ohhhwillow]

Nothing to be hard on you for, I've never been a scientific person but I loved this, that's what it's all about, expressing your passions!

[Pradeep Nair]

Very good attempt...... you won.

[Nic Murray]

you have a really clever writing style here that i admire so much! Really, really enjoyed reading this!

[william keepers]

Very intricate and well woven Amar. Perhaps it is you who has made a new form of poetry!