the best part about you is how quickly you're finished.

the best part about you is how quickly you're finished.

A Poem by Amanda Jane
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7/29/11.

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i tried again.
i tried for you.
you said i broke you but
it was me who wound up broken.
how did it taste?
how do i taste?
i hope my breath in your lungs
is like poison.
pure carbon monoxide.
because i may not be able to breathe,
but i can hold a pen in my hand.
which is more than i can say for you.

© 2011 Amanda Jane


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Amanda Jane
Amanda Jane

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my name is aj. i'm nineteen and i'm in love. i have a couple best friends and an amazing family, and that's all i need. my picture is of my boyfriend and i, until i can find one of just me. more..

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