rapid breathing and butchered words.

rapid breathing and butchered words.

A Poem by Amanda Jane
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6/7/2010.

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inhale.
exhale.
i know you feel that restriction on your lungs, but keep going.

inhale, exhale.
inhale, exhale.
it's not the end of the world.
it's not the end of the world.
it's not the end...
is it?

inhale, inhale.
exhale, inhale, exhale.
everything will be okay, right?
baby? can you hear me?

in- in- inhale, exhale.
in- in- inhale, exhale.
but you said -
you said forever.

© 2011 Amanda Jane


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Amanda Jane
Amanda Jane

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my name is aj. i'm nineteen and i'm in love. i have a couple best friends and an amazing family, and that's all i need. my picture is of my boyfriend and i, until i can find one of just me. more..

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