Empty

a poem about a suicidal teen

Its like im empty inside. My hearts beating but all its doing is keeping me alive. Im starting to wander why I even try...is it worth it to bleed just to survive.?
Deep in my stomach I start to churn
Another lie another bridge to burn. Isnt there anyone out there who even cares.? Or am I just nothing trapped in this dispare...in this wasteland I disappear finally drove overboard by my fears. Lost in the dark abyss my life is clipped. The thread I held on to broke and I slipped. No more wasteland no more tears no more being held by my fears. No more lies no more cuts just this peace and calm is enough.

Author's Note

ignore grammatical and spelling errors. sorry its not really in the form and please leave reviews.

Reviews

[Lexi Richard]

Unfortunately, I'm sure many people can relate to this. Flows nicely and is well written, nice work.

[Amanda Goodman]

Thanks for the compliment Lexi