Not Broken

a poem written after having a very rough start (understatement) with a student and gaining a better understanding of each other...

“Not Broken”

As I go to sweep the classroom,

At the end of the day,

With a broken broom, duck taped together

with a meter stick to give the broomstick strength,

Aaron walks up to me, and say’s,

“That broom has been through some stuff, huh, Ms.?”

I respond, “Yes, it broke a few years ago,

But I fixed it and were still together.”

He smiled.

It took me about two days

For me to figure out

He was talking about us.

Reviews

[Green]

I had a few truly good teachers like this when I was in school, and they can make all the difference. I like to think I appreciated them (although I probably didn't) but I definitely appreciate them now. It's nice to see that Aaron, whoever he is, is recognizing it now and inspiring such lovely writes. Thank you for sharing this moment with us.

I do think you meant duct tape instead of duck tape, however. Took me the majority of my life to figure out which people were saying and I don't think I've ever once actually seen it used on a duct, but ehh. I cheated for the longest time and just said it like 'duc' tape and leaned into an accent so you couldn't tell I didn't commit to a last letter.

[Amanda Reynolds]

Thank you for your comment and I love how you said "Aaron, whoever he is" (and it could be anyone) , because I changed his name for obvious reasons, but this does not make him less real. And yes, reflection does sometimes make the heart grow founder for what our teachers gave us, and sometimes it is so special you see it in the moment, thank you again

[Gee]

Must be very satisfying to change the minds and hearts of those you teach and watch them grow.
Really enjoyed reading you...onto the next:)

[Davidgeo]

Whoa.

Who are you? This is really quite terrific. Do more of this.

I love it.

[Amanda Reynolds]

thank you, it would not have worked it it wasn't real;)

[emmajoygreen]

This has both a witty and meaningful moral.. and one to remember as time goes along. Wonder how that student turned out. A bright as a button young man or someone who charmed ladies with his instincts! Teachers learn so much about human nature. Probably seeing the coming character and personality simmering within! Fine writing and an interesting and quite unusual theme, Amanda.

[Amanda Reynolds]

Thank you, I'm hoping for the best for him and all of and us ;)