always be with you

always be with you

A Poem by A.Low

his blue eyes like the water

to swim deep,to find the hidden secrets

his blue eyes like the sky

to fly high,and find the way to his heart

 

as i sit next to him as we drive

i hear the wooshing of every car we pass by

 

i feel like this couldn't ever get any better

as his hand tickles the palm of my hand

 

i tickle back and forever want the feeling to last

you know that butterfly feeling,the one to give me the chills up my spine

the one to make me still,motionless,even speechless

the feeling i want forever

 

all in your eyes is where you hide your secrets

i want the keys to open the locks to the doors

 

his blue eyes like the water

to swim deep,to find the hidden secrets

his blue eyes like the sky

to fly high,and find the way to his heart

© 2009 A.Low


Author's Note

A.Low
this was a school project and yes its about the guy that was in my group the guy i had a crush on for a awhile

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I like the word play. It does very well for rhythem and emphasis.

Posted 15 Years Ago


aww this is a delightful poem, thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Aww it is so cute.
My favorite lines are:
his blue eyes like the water
to swim deep,to find the hidden secrets
his blue eyes like the sky
to fly high,and find the way to his heart

It has great imagery and is very deep.
I like it a lot. :D
I love you!!!!!


Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 22, 2009

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