always be with you
A Poem by
A.Low
his blue eyes like the water
to swim deep,to find the hidden secrets
his blue eyes like the sky
to fly high,and find the way to his heart
as i sit next to him as we drive
i hear the wooshing of every car we pass by
i feel like this couldn't ever get any better
as his hand tickles the palm of my hand
i tickle back and forever want the feeling to last
you know that butterfly feeling,the one to give me the chills up my spine
the one to make me still,motionless,even speechless
the feeling i want forever
all in your eyes is where you hide your secrets
i want the keys to open the locks to the doors
his blue eyes like the water
to swim deep,to find the hidden secrets
his blue eyes like the sky
to fly high,and find the way to his heart
© 2009 A.Low
Author's Note
this was a school project and yes its about the guy that was in my group the guy i had a crush on for a awhile
Reviews
I like the word play. It does very well for rhythem and emphasis.
Posted 15 Years Ago
aww this is a delightful poem, thanks for sharing.
Posted 15 Years Ago
aww this is a delightful poem, thanks for sharing.
Aww it is so cute.
My favorite lines are:
his blue eyes like the water
to swim deep,to find the hidden secrets
his blue eyes like the sky
to fly high,and find the way to his heart
It has great imagery and is very deep.
I like it a lot. :D
I love you!!!!!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Aww it is so cute.
My favorite lines are:
his blue eyes like the water
to swim deep,to find the hidden secrets
his blue eyes like the sky
to fly high,and find the way to his heart
It has great imagery and is very deep.
I like it a lot. :D
I love you!!!!!
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Added on February 22, 2009
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A.Low crazzyyy county
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Name:Amanda
Gender:Female
Birthday:@2:30pm on 09/04/1992
Status:Taken
Food:Grandmas spaghetti and Nanna's glumpky
Career:Nurse,CNA,Child care day worker,worker
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