why can't i please you

I'm not perfect

I never will be

I live with my flaws every day fo my life

You made me feel perfect ,but now im whipped wrapped around your finger

I tell you everything

you made me fell perfect

I'm not perfect

You make me feel wanted

I feel safe in your arms

Do you care , will you care, will you just listen

I hate to argue,I hate when I'm not with you

I make the best of my day

You'll always just be my highlight

When you call im anxcoius to answer

I love to talk to you

I'm not perfect

I never really say wahst on my mind

I pick and choose on my bad days

You calm me down and make me feel i can take on anything

I'm not perfect

but you sure ARE perfect to me

I mean everything I say to you

I need you to be my night AND SHINING ARMOR

you hurt me when you said whatever

I'm hurt easily , with  me you either roll with the punches or leave

You haven'y left yet, im suprised to find you still love to hold me and kiss me like its our first time

May be you are the one

I'm not perfect

I try to be the best for you and for your sake

I'm not skinny

I'm not gorgoues , not a model , not rich, and sure as hell not perfect

Is that ok are willing to see the real me

Or will you run from me

Wil you run from the real me , can you handle me

I need a man and someone who can handle me

Ttreat me with respect and honesty is that you

I'm not perfect

what do i do

can handle me,flaws and all

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

lol well as you made alrready know i mostly write about my feelings so there it is

Reviews

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

It's a poignant piece about the imperfection inherited with being human. And the high expectations people put on the one's they care about. There's a very personal voice conveying very universal issues and feelings. Well done! Bravo.

FF

[nostal]

Nice.

[BeautifulDisaster]

I'm not perfect

I try to be the best for you and for your sake

I'm not skinny

I'm not gorgoues , not a model , not rich, and sure as hell not perfect

Is that ok are willing to see the real me

Or will you run from me

Wil you run from the real me , can you handle me

I need a man and someone who can handle me

Ttreat me with respect and honesty is that you

I love these lines the most. It is a really good. I love it so much.
Nobody is perfect and everyone just needs to get that through their minds and stop trying to be something they are not. And I am sure the guy you are with thinks you are perfect.
This is excellent. Keep writing. :D:D:D I LOVE YOU!!!!