change me

change me

A Poem by A.Low

If your my freind like you say you are

Take my hand before me and take me on a journey

Take me on a journey to let me know who you are

Show your love to me through the weak and strong times

Only because when your there i am who i want to be

Which is to be strong and to be with you for enternity and beyond

© 2009 A.Low


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great message to a friend1 makes me want to travel! hehe but like it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


very cute :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


this is really good no flaws either

Posted 15 Years Ago


anytime ive shown my true feelings i get hurt. im 18 and ive been engaged twice. but my friend are the ones that carry me through. great poem keep writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


I really loved it. :)
I really enjoyed it. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Nice read you have penned here, found it a joy to read. Look forward to reading more of your writes. Gypsy_Moon

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 11, 2009

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