Shall he the one

Shall he the one

A Poem by A.Low

Shall he be the one

Shall he be the one to hold me tight

I know he cares for me or he wouldn't be with me

Do i care enough to let him go

Could i hurt him,could i hurt me

Could he be the one,will I see my dreams with him

Should I plan my life accordingly to what he says

He calls me his baby and his voice is like music to my ears

I do adore him in every single way but im afraid

Could he be able to change me , is he the one that i want to change for

Will i hear the bells,see the lights,see the ring

Somebody tell me is he the one

 

 

© 2009 A.Low


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You captured a feeling that I think we all have in a well written inner monolouge. Im on the other end of that spectrum we all call a relationship. But this made me remember the feeling, which is what writing is about to me. Grats.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Love is in the air.. nothing better than to feel the energy.... this poem is beautiful and sincere!




Posted 15 Years Ago


I LOVE IT!!!
I feel the emotion in it.
I can see that you are confused.
Good Write.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 11, 2009

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