Colorado home

Where it snow when 
It wants to snow 

Colorado home 
Colorado home 
The mountain is nothing 
Like any other mountain 
It is high 

above Ocean level

There is nothing

 like the Colorado 

snow it sparkles 

like glitter there nothing

 like the beautiful Colorado

 pine trees are the greens

 pine trees in the world

there nothing like the 

Colorado rain small like

 fresh laundry smell

I love the rain smell and

 the pine trees smell

Colorado home 
I was born and raised 
In Colorado where always 
Be my home state in my 
Heart is so beautiful 
There is no where like 
Colorado in the world 
© Amanda Kay Hill
12/21/16

Author's Note

Inspire by Cherisse Powers

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

Add more details. It's much too bare in what is otherwise a fine poem. Lengthen the lines a bit maybe.

[Amanda Kay Hill]

Thank you I have taking you advice and add more details

[Johnson Bobby]

very nice poem if had kept stanza going