Colorado rain

Colorado rain 

Sitting inside hearing 

the rain hitting the roof

Colorado rain 

Colorado rain 

Colorado rain 

Sitting inside hearing 

the rain hitting the roof 

and having the windows 

open and painting enjoy 

the rain smell I love the 

smell of the rain and 

hearing the rain 

hitting the roof 

Colorado rain 

Colorado rain 

I love seeing the rainbow 

after a rainstorm and 

the colors seeing the 

rainbow is so 

relaxing and peaceful 

Colorado rain 

© Amanda Kay Hill

8/17/16

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The poems got beats with your repetition of words. It's amazing. Even I love rain no doubt about that. Nice one!

[FIN]

I loved this. The repetition of the lines reminded me of the splashing of rain and the flow of the piece, even though slight made it ever more peaceful, which I find rain to be.