Loving is No Dance on Roses.

The story of my only breakup... A bit sad... Bur that's how life is sometimes is...

Loving is No Dance on Roses.

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Letting go of your love…

I remember how hard it was.

Seeing your face in every cloud,

Every handsome male’s face.

Loving you

Was like a fairytale,

Just with a gloomy ending

Instead of a happy one…

I remember how petty I was.

Everyone took pity on me,

“Oh, poor Amanda, so sweet and yet so naive.”

And all the sweet words,

“He doesn’t deserve you;

He’s just a fool.”

No.

Wait.

I didn’t get those words,

Not from my dear friends,

But from my beloved family members.

No.

My friends

Met up with him,

Hang out with him,

Made friends with him.

They didn’t even know him.

Had just met over the internet.

But,

You know what?

All though I was a bit…

Bitter in the past,

I have forgiven them.

All of them.

For all their…

Doings.

Even their sudden departure.

I love the good memories we’ve had together,

And those will always remain.

But sometimes,

Sometimes,

The dark ones 

Overshadow these,

Unfortunately.

Author's Note

Have you ever experienced something alike?

Reviews

[The Fallen]

Omg Yes I have experienced this..and it sucks :$ Very awesome poem though :D

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you, Olivia ^^
I'm sorry you have to go through something like this...

[The Fallen]

Your welcome, and It's alright, things happen for a reason

[Amanda J. S.]

Yeah.. they really do..
As they say "what doesn't kill you makes you stronger" ;o)

[The Fallen]

Aha Yup :)

[Steven Cash]

OOoooooh, nice

True, tho it's never happened to me, it's happened to people I know.

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you ^^
I feel for those you know...

[Steven Cash]

:)