Loving is No Dance on Roses.

The story of my only breakup... A bit sad... Bur that's how life is sometimes is...

Loving is No Dance on Roses.

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Letting go of your love…

I remember how hard it was.

Seeing your face in every cloud,

Every handsome male’s face.

Loving you

Was like a fairytale,

Just with a gloomy ending

Instead of a happy one…

I remember how petty I was.

Everyone took pity on me,

“Oh, poor Amanda, so sweet and yet so naive.”

And all the sweet words,

“He doesn’t deserve you;

He’s just a fool.”

No.

Wait.

I didn’t get those words,

Not from my dear friends,

But from my beloved family members.

No.

My friends

Met up with him,

Hang out with him,

Made friends with him.

They didn’t even know him.

Had just met over the internet.

But,

You know what?

All though I was a bit…

Bitter in the past,

I have forgiven them.

All of them.

For all their…

Doings.

Even their sudden departure.

I love the good memories we’ve had together,

And those will always remain.

But sometimes,

Sometimes,

The dark ones 

Overshadow these,

Unfortunately.

Author's Note

Have you ever experienced something alike?

Reviews

[Sukylola]

I haven'tbut you made me feel the emotion so much it's like i had. Really good!!

[Jordan's Back]

Wow, This has an Exquisite Taste and Texture, and i believe it is safe to say Everyone has felt the Shadow of loves burdens. Wonderful write!

[C.C. Marx]

sadly yes, but he moved on much quicker than i did, to a girl who only went out with him because she knew i still liked him :(

[Sami Khalil]

The dark ones
overshadow these.
Nice write.

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you! :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Amanda J. S.]

^^

[Sunny Skye]

Wow! Yes i have experiances this and it sucks! Good poem do i did enjoy it and made me remember somehtings that happened. Good job!

-SkyeBlanco

[Isobella Rose]

Very relatable... Great poem :)

[J. Viands]

Solid could feel the whole thing… who hasn’t experienced something like that keep it up I want more real s**t like this best yet bravo

[Amanda J. S.]

thank you! ^^

[Pratik]

A real write.. we all have these phonies in disguise of friends... the sooner you get rid the better... but yes, sometimes it still hurts to think how stupid we had been... You have done a god job with this one.. straight and direct.. no mincing words.. Loved this

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you very much :o)

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Very relatable. Such honesty and emotion. Good job

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you ^^