In a world full of nothing, a girl is sitting alone in a chair, whispering:

In a world full of nothing, a girl is sitting alone in a chair, whispering:

A Poem by Amanda J. S.
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Hm.... (how I once felt)

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"You have taken me away from everything I love.

You have abducted me.

You beckoned me to follow you.

I didn't want to.

I could feel that you weren't good for me.

But you wouldn't go away.

You just stood there,

Gawking at me with those hollow eyes,

Whispering how miserable you were.

When I at last followed you,

Because you frightened me,

You left me in this world full of nothing.

A world where no flare of light occurs.

A world were not even my worst nightmares dare to go.

You left me in this world,

This grim world,

Where I can reach no one,

And no one can reach me."

© 2012 Amanda J. S.


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I don't know what is sadder, the fact that someone got so lost by someone else's actions or the actions of that person, losing someone so easily. Very sad, yet creative piece, speaking out I hope, to others, as a warning.

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Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark



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