The Lack of Beauty...

The morning air is crisp and sharp.

The dew on the windows is beautiful as diamonds.

I long for the times

Where I could indulge their beauty

But I guess it is too much to ask.

I miss the times where I could enjoy the seas.

I miss the times where a rainy day

Was a cozy day.

Never coming back.

I lack a happiness 

That lets me enjoy the scents 

And the taste of Earth’s wonders.

I lack a happiness 

That helps me get through the day.

Oh, how I just long for the time

Miss the time

Where I could just live.

Reviews

[Michael Soul]

a child within yearn's to return care free.
just to be!!! nice

[Raven]

:)
I know this shouldnt matter, but feedback is feedback- and the one thing I dislike about this is actually the formatting- I dont like how large you've made the font- I feel if you want the font that large, you need a 'prettier' font.

[Amanda J. S.]

Haha! I know! I actually made it like this BECAUSE I didn't like the font.... (sounds weird! I know..) I describe beautiful things that I can't appreciate... This is an ugly thing that I can't appreciate ^^(like there is something that is actually right to dislike!)

-Either that or I was just being sloppy when I made this poem...

(I like the first explanation better!)

[Raven]

Either way, glad you understand :) Good work on the poem

[Hamza]

somewhat depicts my story..
beautiful piece :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

this is cool!! :D

[Cerise]

wooow..you r wonderful my dear lady..:)..ery nicely written....touchy..i miss soo many thngs i dont evn rembr anymore....:P..hehe..bt truly u hav done amazing work

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you ^^

[Cerise]

:)...np

[Amanda J. S.]

^^

[Sukylola]

Gorgeous and i can really relate to it sometimes!

[RYDER]

smple n beautiful

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Simple, sad and well written. Beautiful.

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Love it, well done :)