Where are You Now?

Where are You Now?

A Poem by Amanda J. S.
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A poem dedicated to an old friend....

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Where are you now?


You said you would be there for me

Always.

You called me your best friend

And I called you mine.


We weren't romantically involved

Even though people might have thought so.

I saw you as the brother I never had

But what did that really mean to you?


When things got tough,

As it normally does for "different" people like me

You weren't there for me anymore.

When I turned out not to be as normal as you thought,

We drifted apart like ice flakes on heating water.


My friend,

I miss the times with you

But I wouldn't take them back

For anything in the world. 


Sincerely,

Amanda J. S. 

© 2012 Amanda J. S.


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Amanda J. S.
A poem that really means a lot to me...

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I can sense it too, well wrote it is

Posted 11 Years Ago


there are some relations we cannot define
and this one's been faced by almost everyone ...



Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow, totally relatable I have friend just like that. Only you're lucky, you get to live off good memories you too share where I grimace at what happened to my friend. :| Lovely poem, wonderul as always! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very nice poem of friendship. Hard to lose a good friend. We will trust few with our laughter and our tears. I like the desire to have the good friend back in a life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


I can relate to this. I like it, great job as always :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Amanda! ^^
indeed great Amanda i like the message but am kind of struggling with your style,spicing it i would say; Not romantically we were involved,
thought inlove we not, people believed -
I saw you as a brother, I never had
thought you felt anything we had,
what did it mean to you ?
please don't be offended in just liked stanza 2 thats why i spiced it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Hmm... I get what you're thinking... But it wouldn't really be my words...
Ice flakes was a priceless line. Absolutely AMAZINGGGGG

100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Thank you :-)
Just curious HOW the author is different?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

It's an all too long story... :-)
It is said that when one door closes another opens. Shall we not, in our secret hearts, have hope that it shall be so for these two that were once so close? You are a tender write, Amanda, and the world is better for it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on September 9, 2012
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Tags: friend, best friend, brother, love, friendship, lost, goodbye

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Amanda J. S.
Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark



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