Lying in The Grass...

A really, REALLY short poem :-)

I am lying in the soft grass

Looking up upon the sky.

Wishing I was a bird

And that I could fly.

-Amanda J. S.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Steven Cash]

Simple but great!

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank You!

[Rhianne Ney]

I want to fly also if the atmosphere is safe... we are suffering from Global Warming and fleeing is not easy
Like it all along!
;)

[Amanda J. S.]

^^

[Erica Ross]

Short & sweet :) I wish I was a bird too :/ lol

[Amanda J. S.]

Haha! I think we all do at some point! ^^

[Bumble]

Simple, but still lovely. n_n

[Amanda J. S.]

Thanks ^^

[Soul Fire]

I love this so much :D

[Amanda J. S.]

Yay!

[Isobella Rose]

Love it! I think we all want this at one point in our lives.

[Amanda J. S.]

Yeah.. just to be free...
Glad you liked it! ^^

[Westminster Abbey]

Love it, I do that too!

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you! :-)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Less is often more... this is certainly the case. It takes skill to distill with an essence of will so as not to kill with bitter pill and make ill ...your dear readers - as I have just done. =8Q Ack!

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you very much! :-)

[NoelleRash]

I like it. Simple.

[Amanda J. S.]

^^