Lying in The Grass...

A really, REALLY short poem :-)

I am lying in the soft grass

Looking up upon the sky.

Wishing I was a bird

And that I could fly.

-Amanda J. S.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Ayanda Musawami France ..]

its perfect and straight to the point, but makes wonder why?

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Create a nice vision with your words. Would be nice to have wings and be able to fly free. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Short but yet still very elegantly written. A beautiful piece, I really like it.

[Cherrie Palmer]

your poem is soft and like a bird in flight it is smooth and graceful
ps
in many of my dreams I can fly

[Allycat]

wonderful! I too, sometimes wish I could be a bird and fly. I love how short and simple it is, and how it gets right to the point.
Excellent write! :D

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you very much! 😊

[Ayanda Musawami France ..]

Wow great Amanda now i kind of see snd get your style of writing

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you :-)

[Aehr]

aww.. pretty!

[RYDER]

^0^ short n sweet

[Jimmy Combs]

Amen...

[Amanda J. S.]

^^