My Love will be....

hmmmm.....

My love for you 
Will always be.
Maybe hidden
 Sometimes
But always there.

I'll compare my love for you 
With the sun at day
And with the moon at night.

No matter where you'll be
You will always be able to spot it.
Clouds can maybe cover it up
But it'll always be there
Right behind those clouds
No matter how wide they might be.

My love for you will be as eternal
As thoughts
As ideas
And will always be right there
But maybe concealed...

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Ayanda Musawami France ..]

wow happy him, lovely i like it

[Irvette Dauphine]

great! this is great.. like this poem :)

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Wow, amazing :)
100/100

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you! ^-^

[Ayanda Musawami France ..]

Wish does words could be sad unto me,i love it

[Amanda J. S.]

^^

[Jimmy Combs]

What is my review? Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, so here is my PERSONAL response to you, Amanda...
My love for you
Will always be.
Maybe hidden
Sometimes
But always there.

I'll compare my love for you
With the sun at day
And with the moon at night.

No matter where you'll be
You will always be able to spot it.
Clouds can maybe cover it up
But it'll always be there
Right behind those clouds
No matter how wide they might be.

My love for you will be as eternal
As thoughts
As ideas
And will always be right there
But maybe concealed...

[Amanda J. S.]

Hm... I don't get it? :-D

[Rhianne Ney]

If this is dedicated to somebody then you just made that person feel special ;D

[Erica Ross]

Yessssssss !!!!

[Soul Fire]

Pretty

[Steven Cash]

I love it. Who is it about? PM me that if u don't mind

[Amanda J. S.]

It's not about anyone, yet :-)

[Steven Cash]

Ah ok gotcha. I thought you found someone and was afraid to say
I hope you find him soon

[Amanda J. S.]

Yeah... :-)