In My Own Personal Cage....

In My Own Personal Cage....

A Poem by Amanda J. S.
"

How I felt, not so long ago....

"

The months pass by

While I perch here

Looking out upon the world

Moving on without me in it.


In my own personal cage

I wonder if anyone misses me

Out there,

Outside outside my closed windows.


The people pass by

Angry,

Happy,

Depressed.


I just continue to sit here,

Not able to find my way out of this prison 


In here

There is no night

No day.

No summer

No winter.

No pain

No pleasure.

Just…

Nothing.

© 2012 Amanda J. S.


Author's Note

Amanda J. S.
hm...

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I believe everyone is a beat off from everyone else. We're all in chaos, but it's a beautiful chaos. Don't fret, Amanda. You will find your rhythm soon enough.


Happy writing,
Savannah

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Thank you :-)
Falling Leaf.

12 Years Ago

Most welcome
Dark, brooding and contemplative... I assume the pose of The Thinker and "perch" beside you. We are birds on a wire, waiting to drop to the ground where (as I have mentioned elsewhere) only a few will weep.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Nice way to see it :-)
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
~
If you have lived it, you know the meaning. I have, so I do. Very accurate ode to numbness and isolation. Nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Thank you :-)
just nothing?


Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

nope... that was how I felt once... hope that will never happen again ^^
de_maruf

12 Years Ago

i think so
that will be better
Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Yeah.. :-)

2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

483 Views
15 Reviews
Rating
Added on September 6, 2012
Last Updated on September 6, 2012
Tags: alone, depresses, nothing

Author

Amanda J. S.
Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark



About
Hello, lovely people of Wristerscafe.org! I am a sixteen-year-old girl from Denmark, and my name is Amanda :-) I began writing about one and a half year ago, and a day hasn't gone by without me .. more..

Writing
untitled. untitled.

A Story by Amanda J. S.



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..