The Savior

A poem about a girl who wants to save everybody...

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Author's Note

Some may not understand this poem... You'll have to really give it some thought!

Reviews

[RYDER]

black and white
u r a gr8 writer i must say

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you :-)

[Jimmy Combs]

Hmmmm....dark and light at the same time.....yet STILL "you" come thru as in all of your other work.

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you :-)

[meg333]

Ooooo, nice!!! Right from the first few lines, you had me hooked with that description. And then when you get to the basic meaning of the poem, it's something a lot of us can relate to (myself for sure). Good job!

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you very much :-)

[afra]

i got it ...well done

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you :-)

[Vinay Kumar]

Good work again..
I m impressed.. :)

[Amanda J. S.]

Yay. Thank you! ^^

[Brandon S. Whitten]

We can only do what we can, then let go and let God. Excellent read and write.

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you! :-)

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you! :-)

[Toni Blackerby]

i love it i think ur an amazing writer so keep it up girl

[Amanda J. S.]

Aww, thank you, Toni :-)
Anything of yours that you want me to give a look? ^^

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u

[Westminster Abbey]

I love it! I wish there were more people like this in the world! 99/100

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you :-)

[Steven Cash]

I liked it a lot. And I agree with Matt on the meaning.

lol

[Amanda J. S.]

Haha :-)

Thank you!