My Beautiful Void

My Beautiful Void

A Poem by Amanda J. S.
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A feeling living inside most depressed souls...

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A void

In my heart,

my soul,

And my head.

 

That void,

Filling me with pain

With aching agony.


This void

A beautiful disaster

Beauty in form of pain

Pain and torment.


My void,

Controlling my senses,

My body,

And my soul.


Oh how I admire that beautiful,

 tormenting void.

© 2012 Amanda J. S.


Author's Note

Amanda J. S.
My beautiful agony....

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Amanda, this is very Zen-like... describing and emoting a nothingness. It makes (this) one think... how can a 'nothing' (a void) be something and how can it illicit/control/direct/source human emotion? If 'nothing' can do that then it is surely something and a beauty worth admiration. Well done! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Thank you! This was exactly what I was trying to achieve!
Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T. Serrat

12 Years Ago

Woo hoo! ...finally, nailed one. A poet(ess) is a living oxymoron. Makes you wonder what they fee.. read more
Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Haha, yeah :-)
It has been many many years since I was ever depressed and I have never clinically suffered from depression. I do know many that have and I think they would relate to this far more than I could...This was as good as anything you have done I think...You clearly have an insight into that dark world

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Yeah.. I have had some spots in my short life... :-)
Dr. Wood ?

12 Years Ago

must help to appreciate the good spots though
Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Yeah :-) it really does

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Added on August 30, 2012
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Amanda J. S.
Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark



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