I'm yearning for...

A little wish....

I'm yearning for...

The sound of your voice,

Leaving me absolutely no choice.

The sound of that melody.

Oh how I could keep listening to it.

Listening to it for hours.

The feel of your skin,

Soft like satin,

I can't forget.

I don't wish to forget.

Please take my hand in yours.

Show me your world,

your passions,

Your favorite place.

Oh you

I don't know.

At least not yet.

Please come to me.

Come to me soon.

My Significant Other.

Author's Note

Hm....

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

My Significant Other a good line
This write is interesting
Keep writing, dude (:

[afra]

great write

[Khaled Hishma]

it is good,however, if the the first 2 lines were as follow to rhyme :The sound of your voice...Leaving me but no choice.The melody with sounds..I can keep listening to...For so many hours to go. Just a suggestion.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Hmmmm.................I know what it is.....its the first two lines....am not keen on the voice choice rhyme at the start.....it set me up all wrong for the rest of the poem.

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Very heartfelt piece. I think we are all in this position one way or another.

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you :-)

[RYDER]

Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece. nothing can be better than this

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you! :-)

[RYDER]

^_^

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Amazing, wonderful and greatly written :)
I loved the ending too!
100/100

[Amanda J. S.]

Yay! Thanks! :-)

[Irvette Dauphine]

hmmmmmmmmmm... :)
this is great :D

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you! :-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

very good, you're getting even better

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you :-)
(sorry that I took the last comment a bit near! I had had a really, really bad day)

[Dr. Wood ?]

smiling now though eh? This was a great write

[Amanda J. S.]

Yeah, I'm smiling now :-)
Thank you