His Eternal Love

A little poem I wrote about true love :-) (in my eyes)

His Eternal Love

He went to bed every night,

Aching for her.

Aching for her presence.

Trembling with grief.

Waking up every morning,

Mourning the loss of his eternal love.

Mourning his beautiful angel.

The love was lost,

Gone,

Buried deep in the dirty ground.

He wouldn’t ever get to touch that soft skin again.

Her skin.

Their lips would never get to entwine again.

Never again would he taste her.

That alluring taste,

The taste he had never been able to resist.

Decades after their sunder,

He held his last breath,

Thinking about her.

Only her.

His eternal love,

And he was sure,

Certain, even,

That they would meet again.

He was buried beside her,

His eternal young wife,

Friend,

Flirt,

Mistress,

Love.

She had been all that.

All that and more.

So much more.

She was... 

Her.

Author's Note

What do you guys think? :-)

Reviews

[Khaled Hishma]

beautiful and creative

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you!

[Rtrt]

Fabulous, I absolutely love this piece! Great, great job. Boy without love we would be lost, but sometimes with it we lose more.

[Amanda J. S.]

Yeah :-)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

So talented and yet so young.

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you! :-)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

No thank you! Friend :)

[Steven Cash]

I liked it! NICE! :)lol

Reminds me of something, and IDK what...

[Amanda J. S.]

Haha okay :-)

[Steven Cash]

AH! That's it! Lucy by Skillet!

[Amanda J. S.]

I'll check it out :-)

[Steven Cash]

oh, you do'nt have to. I hate that song lol

The poem reminded me of it tho cause it's about a guy coping with the loss of his girlfriend

[Amanda J. S.]

Oh. Is it the melody that is bad or? :-)

[Steven Cash]

Oh, the melody is wonderful, but the guy who is singing it sounds like he is gargling sand. Oh, when you hear his voice you will konw what I'm saying

[Amanda J. S.]

Haha, I'll check it out right now!

[Amanda J. S.]

he sounds a little... hoarse... :-D