My Neon-green Pine Tree

A poem about a special person, whom I love :-)

My Neon-green Pine Tree.

 

The first time I saw you,

Was a December night.

You were standing in the cold,

Not able to fight.

 

The first thing I noticed,

Your colors so unnaturally bright.

While the others so dark,

They looked so boringly right.

 

I left you alone,

Too scared to stand out,

For that I am so sorry,

But the tale gets better in a bout.

 

Four moons later I came back.

You were still standing,

Looking so calm,

While others would have been panting.

 

I took you home,

Made it comfortable for you,

I was going to make you happy,

Because you deserve that, too!

 

If anyone should wonder who you are,

They can just ask me,

You are completely special,

My neon-green pine tree! 

Author's Note

Just something I wrote :-) (not edited. so there may be some typos!)

Reviews

[Khaled Hishma]

this one is great,simple and to the point

[Rhianne Ney]

This is a great poem... it's good that you paid attention to the poor neon green tree
Really interesting (:
100/100

[zainul]

Special subject.
Lovely write.

[Dr. Wood ?]

pretty good, I don't know if you need the last verse. when the title is there.....Good though, one of your best I would say

[Irvette Dauphine]

this poem is really nice..
like this :)

[LuciaMarie]

i think this is really cute, and well written even though it's unedited.

[Steven Cash]

This is nice. Very nice.

Who is it about?

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Nicely done! Very tender and shy but an underlying forceful honesty.