the ocean.

Gasping for the breath,
that will save me from this death.
Choking - barely breathing,
blind - no longer seeing.

Suffocated by the masses,
the wave comes and it crashes.
My life - a reckless ship at sea,
a ship that's slowly drowning me.

There is so much confusion,
behind the fake illusion.
I can't differentiate what's real,
from the piercing pain I feel.

This love - a fatal attraction,
has put the wheels in action.
Spinning a web of lies,
plotting my demise.

This soul is crying out,
let it scream; let it shout.
I'm still searching for the notion,
that will free me from this deadly ocean.

Reviews

[Alex Thomas]

It is sometimes hard to believe emotions are comparable to drowning. Yet sometimes it is so much worse. Very vivid languages and excellent rhymes. Great rhythm as well.