I Know

Surprisingly happy (:

I'm smiling more now,

Not crying constantly anymore,

Truly feeling better, surprisingly,

And my heart isn't as sore.

 

Now, I actually feel happy,

Life is looking up again,

Loved ones by my side,

Now my new life may begin.

 

I'm still young, I know,

I have plenty of life in me,

People keep on saying that,

And I'm beginning to agree.

 

I can be happy and in love,

And I know I will be again,

Then I can have a love story,

Without a depressing end.

Reviews

[scripted]

It sounds like someone is seeing the light after a relationship that was blocking the shine for to long. I'm glad to see that you are realizing that you are loved by many. Heartbreak is a blindinng object that can take hold of your life and turn it into something full of darkness, thankfully you didn't let it keep hold of who you are. Thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle

[hussain]

bright future waits for the gloomy past to die.....and there can be love story again
Nicely done.

[Laura Harrison]

What a lovely poem! :) there is always a light at the end of the tunnel

[Mike Cole]

I think that we can all find happiness, if we try and have a good outlook or attitude on our current situations. Just like you wrote in the poem the realization of the things that you do have instead of focusing on the things that you do not. It was a great poem and well written. Keep writing!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awww. Thank you so much (:

[Rabbi Tzephanyah Ben Yo..]

a Beautiful piece With delightful undertones. Excellent job :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awww, haha, thank you (:

[Rahul]

Life's awesome but some bad people make it complicated to live and they hurt everyone in the life... so, happiness and sadness both phrases come and move along the way of life together... you made this write from your heart again, liked this piece, this;s a true as well as a real piece. It's a deep write you made...
100/100, you've earned indeeed.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you so much, Rahul! I'm glad you enjoyed it (:

[Rahul]

Your Welcome and My pleasure :) yeah, off course i did even i read your stuffs after a long time and you know what i was really missing you and your stuffs :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Oh okay, haha (: well I'm back now, so it's all good!

[Rahul]

Yeah... :) so, are you planning to write some more stuffs ?

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I'm not sure yet. I know I will eventually. We'll see (:

[Rahul]

That's great:), well, if you do, then don't forget to let me know :P ok :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Will do, haha(:

[Wonderful Letdown]

Hope. If you have hope, you can get through anything. Never give up on love, because it's one of the greatest joys and blessing a person could ever have. I'm sure you'll find your happily ever after eventually.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you so much for this advice and the review! It means a lot (:

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

positive affirmations always help
keep up the good cheer
thc:)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Haha. Very true! And thank you (:

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes

[Quiet Child]

its really good, i absolutely love this. full of human emotion and provokes even more. you never want to let yourself fall without picking yourself up again. bravery and courage come to few, but one who cherish it are its most prized. keep it up!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you so much (:

[Quiet Child]

Your very welcome (:

[Pax]

your healing fast and understanding life .... your doing great ms. Amanda ... keep it up... keep penning and expressing those thoughts.. great work here...

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahaha, thanks so much (: